The Dawning

My sixth piece in my space fox series, featuring Twilight and Dawn. I have to say I don't think this piece has any improvements in it as I feel Eternal Union did, but I can't fix it to where I'm comfortable with it so this is how it will stay for now. If anyone can tell me what seems awkward about it I'd appreciate it, I'll just have to come back to it later when I'm not so tired and am feeling better.